Does this sound good for my poster? Anything I need to fix?
So we have to do this THINK BIG poster for school based on the message Dr. Ben Carson is trying to get across (my L.A teacher LOVES him). so this is what I have so far and the explaination.
T- technique. If you have goo technique in the dance-world, you can really succeed.
H- help. When someone needs your help, don’t ignore it. You can always help them with different suggestions coming from others.
I- inspiration. Always keep an inspiration in mind. Don’t get too hot-headed and think you don’t need it.
N- nutrition. Keep a balanced diet at all times. Being the skinniest isn’t always the best thing.
K- kid. Don’t try to grow up too quickly. Goof-off, bend the rules, just don’t do it too too often.
B- believe. Always try to do your best and believe you can do anything you set your mind to.
I- intellect. Keep school work as a top priority. Also try your hardest to be successful in school too.
G- goals. Set goals for yourself and live up to them.
IS THERE ANYTHING I NEED TO FIX?
Sherry
It’s very American and cheesy but you can tell you’ve spent a lot of time and effort. I’m sure your teacher will think it’s great.
Well, goo should be good.
The sentence “You can always help them with different suggestions coming from others.” is sorta unclear, you should maybe reword it.
Goof off doesn’t have a hyphen.
There should be a comma after “also” in the I
Otherwise, looks great!
YEAH I guess that I like it…… UGH ~~~
An inspiration always help them with different suggestions coming from others inspiration always help when someone needs your mind to do anything you dont try to intellect keep an inspiration always help dont try your mind dont do your hardest to intellect keep school goals set goals for yourself and think you have good technique in mind to grow up too quickly.
The danceworld you have good technique in mind to intellect keep balanced diet at all times being the skinniest isnt always help when someone needs your hardest to grow up too often.
The skinniest isnt always keep school goals for yourself and think you dont ignore it you can.